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Dreamland March 6th, 2012, 5:04 pm

why am i so lazyyyyy? whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?

@tangyskittles: ohohoh yes, it is a trap lol! (?)
@molavia: ahahah i think he doesn't? heheh and im glad you thinkg the third panel is cute *3* tnx~~

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Dreamland March 7th, 2012, 4:21 pm

@lynxcatdes: OH MY GOD! SHAME ON ME ;;Uu im sorry! as you can see, my english is really bad! D;! thank you for the help! and feel free to do it again if you see grammar mistakes in the future! THANK YOU! <3<3 i edited it already!

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|-Himitsu-| March 7th, 2012, 10:35 am

Oh god.. that customer looks so pretty c:

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tangyskittles March 7th, 2012, 3:53 pm

FUUUU-

Ferb.
Stop being so cute.
My heart can't take it D:

-flails-

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yay new page!

lynxcatdes March 7th, 2012, 4:10 pm

ferb is so cute ;]

Thought i would let you know that there are a few grammar/spelling mistakes in the first box:

~"let me explain you". maybe change that to ""let me explain the rules" since he's not explaining ferb, which is what you have right now.

~"we made the inventary". first, "inventary" is spelled "inventory". Second i would change the "made" to "check", "examine", "inspect", or "look over" since i think that's what you meant.

~"checked the sales". change "checked" to "check" because he's talking in the future tense, not the past tense.

~"when a client come". chance "come" to "comes" again because he talking in future tense, not present tense.

~"mantenance to the instruments" is spelled maintenance. Also you might want to rephrase, instead of "to" maybe "on" would sound smoother.

~"reparments". change it to "repairs", its not a word (though it sounds like it should be one).

I hope the above helps!

Otherwise, i'm loving the comic and can't wait to see where you take this! ;D

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Didn't forget about this ^^"

molavia March 13th, 2012, 12:54 am

I just got sucked in by a ff xD
Someday you will kill me with these eyes you draw. So fascinating *.*
And i want to ruffle trough Ferb's Hair ... His Smile is so catching *smiles now, too*
Till the next update =3

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♥.♥

rebecca_chan March 20th, 2012, 1:52 pm

wow this comic is soo cool so far cant wait for your next update :3 also i love how you draw ferb, he looks really cute too :3

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Guest March 29th, 2012, 9:31 am

@Dreamland: Hussie!

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For I Am Bren August 18th, 2012, 4:54 pm

@Guest: YES.